the artistry was solid but some of the animations were a bit lack luster, but don't get me wrong! it was incredibly well done otherwise! I always love it when your bad guy looks like TotalBiscuit.
you animation abilities are top notch, (no pun intended) but you need to work on story board, the concept was just kind of confusing...
Thanks a bunch for the critique. I will definitely try to improve upon my story telling. Thanks again.
WHAT CANADIAN ACCENT!?!?!?! canadians don't have an accent you american nobs! grah, anyways, great film, loved the style, i would love to see more from you!
i like the way that the farther down you get the faster your character moves in time with the time limit to each level (add on to that guy below, i think there's a timer on each level that decreases the further you go down, or at least it's more likely for you to fall in a random pit trap the further down you are) it really makes the panicked feel i believe you were trying to go for, when you start the game, whatever, it's just a puzzle game, and you're roaming about with little to no worry, but the farther down you get the more it becomes apparent that the bottom isn't a place you want to be, you gave that feeling to the player, not just the character, and that's pretty admirable, great game, however i would make a bit of an adjustment to it, from very early on it becomes easily apparent there's no way to get back up once you fall down past the first level, that's ok near the end, but it should come in degrees, in a 1 step forward 2 steps back kind of way, if you know what i mean. currently it feels like a straight plummet when it should be a slow decent into madness
Thanks for the review! Your idea is a good one, and in fact, it's already in the game, although it's more a 1 step forward, 6 steps back! If you're lucky, or move carefully to avoid pits, you'll probably be able to climb a ladder or two, perhaps even get up to the first level again!
first game you make should:
a) not be hentai
b) not be gif's
points for trying though.
i didnt kill the boss.
the game glitched and the last door was open on its own im not submiting score.
gud game not the greatest but fun!
i can use this in an up coming animation (be prepared gunk, i shall have use for you ;))
Thanks gunkel, I will be using this right about now, it will fit the requirements quite well, but i didn't need it to be 3 minutes long. :P
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